Appendix A: Notes from the 30
Unlike last year, I've offered all of this year's 30/30 efforts without any context, save for the occasional descriptive title. In part it's because I know you're smart cookies who will look it up (dear); in part it's because I'm lazy and easily distracted.
In the spirit of fair play, here's some glosses and notes. Poems were prompted by the NaPoWriMo unless otherwise noted.
- "Old development" [unprompted] - An homage to Harbutowice, a weird unincorporated hamlet in my hometown. It's named for a village in Poland, and owing to either a nearby body of water or some X-Files shit, the sun appears to rise in the west there.
- "Against The Waste Land" [unprompted] - Not much explanation needed. Title inspired by PSC's poem against Walk the Line, which is amazing.
- "Darkness" - I double-checked to make sure that "milliseconds" is the right order of magnitude for a blink.
- "Ectopia cordis" - Why it's "cordis" and not "cardis," I don't know. Blame wikipedia. The bit about the Gore-Tex myocardial sleeve is true (and extremely awesome, don't you think?)
- "Uncles I didn't have/Poetry" - Ugh, writing an Ars Poetica with the word "poetry" in the title... sorry. I really don't have any uncles. Narragansett Beer is a New England thing; they just started making it again. Is Daffy's ("Clothing bargains for millionaires") an East Coast thing only? MCL = medial collateral ligament, an injury rarely mentioned without the preamble "season-ending."
- "The moon on our terms" - The proper names are all real moon sites from the final manned Apollo mission. Moondust does smell like Cordite, according to those few who know.
- "Blind date, coffee shop" - The actual date went even worse than portrayed here.
- "Zippo" - Pretty straight-forward extended metaphor exercise. It may help to know that Vassar in my era was more than 60% smokers, so having a light was more than a Mad Men affectation.
- "Pastime" - Heavily influenced by 16 Horsepower and (naturally) Perry. A bit stereotypey, alas. "Pleasant" was a real Appalachian men's name. "The Old Rugged Cross" would actually make a lousy hoedown song, I think, but it worked for the text.
- "Life event, Beth Sholom" - The temple in Roslyn, NY. At least 50% of my maternal family's weddings and b'nai mitzot took place here.
- "Dear pencil" - I prefer to chew pens.
- "Nymphs and reapers heavily vanish" - from the famous dumbshow stage directions in The Tempest. "Blue Sailors" are a name chicory flowers. Doesn't "lanceolate" sound better than "sawtooth"?
- "Poem starting with a line from Norman Dubie" - QED. I kind of cheat conflating Ursa Major and the Big Dipper. So many great prog-rock bands got the initial treatment--ELP, ELO... HP Lovecraft already had initials, so.
- "Cleave poem for sleeping arrangements" - The allusory cat is Willie, who has only one eye, and is heavy as the philosphical rock so heavy God Himself cannot move it. A very annoying form, if useful in its way.
- "Deadline" [Poetic Asides] - I'm not sure if that self-extinguishing cigarette paper is ubiquitous, but they wouldn't need it if there weren't so many accelerants smothering the tobacco.
- "Cloves" - The "cloved lemon" game is a Renn Faire thing--the only thing that can render a kissing game less appealing.
- "Ununseptium" - Element 117, pending whoever's in charge of these things giving it an official name.
- "Referred pain" [unprompted] - Written on the train back from the Poetry Festival using an iPod Touch. A friend, Lillian I think, suggested I write this based on something I said offhand.
- "Don't Look Back in Anger" - Based on a true story from Teachers College. A com is a Vietnamese food stand.
- "As in 'vogue'" - Andy Moog, G, Boston Bruins. His poster hung on my door for the longest time.
- "Phil. 4:13" - "I can do everything through him that gives me strength."
- "Just mad about saffron" - I was reading Casino Royale and had to look up the rules of Chemin-de-fer Baccarat. (A natural 8 or 9 is an automatic win.) Vikruti-Lakshmi is a Hindi nature goddess-aspect.
- "A penguin considers the WTO protests, Seattle, 1999" - What the penguin was doing in Seattle, I'll never know.
- "When in Rome" - Probably reveals my shocking ignorance of Los Angeles. Also somehow inspired by Ludacris.
- "Please don't let me be misunderstood" - I feel badly for the glaring inaccuracy about bourbon-making: it's charred oak, but I sold out the facts to use the word "virgin." Tacky.
- "Victory boogie-woogie" - ISO-9000 probably does have approved party colors. If you've never been through an ISO audit, count yourself lucky.
- "Acrostic" - I really enjoy doing laundry, and tend to assign it overblown meaning.
- "Among School Children 2: Electric Boogaloo" - A triolet. I feel that the "...2: Electric Boogaloo" construction should be used only by those who have, in fact, seen the Breakin' films.
- "Cape Cod Vows to Avenge Death of Cajun Food Tradition" - A pastiche of NYT headlines. How a submarine restaurant would work is unclear to me.
- "O Attic shape" - Going out on Keats, which is chintzy but shows some chutzpah, I think. The names in the first line are, all former city mayors. And I do like that the great Greek icon of NYC was designed by an Ashkenazi Jew.
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